I'm not sure about the dean thing. AS for my presentation i actually forgot lol but i believe it was more then a 15? So either way i passed all together. Cause all my other stuff was usually either the max score or a few points off.
Would he? Depends on the goal of "The Dawn" really. Mainly he seems to get in the ways of the Justice League because of his own views of Justice. You know Batman's "no kill policy", Heiko pretty much sees that justice can only be settled with the death of the villians.
Also he kinda views those at times who 'help' or rather get in his way and save the villians as a type of evil and will pretty much try to harm them severely. It goes against his policy to kill a hero but he will try to handicap them (Try and make one cripple) so that they cannot interfere any longer and he will blatently say that the handicap will be atonement for them getting in his way.
Please try to keep character pages in the third person and not to include dialog in history sections since they are to relate to past events or (in the case of some of mine) to record a summary of a roleplay they have just been a part of.
o.o? So my rp style doesn't look professional cause I try to put more? >.> I don't know how long you did rping and not saying i did it longer but i have a different style and have been successful so far in doing so when it comes to rp backgrounds so far. Besides i'm not even done with the history obviously seeing as how it cut off so it isn't right to judge before it isn't even finished.
I am not judging just giving a suggestion on how to improve the creation of character profiles (from a unbiased admin prospective). I learned how to write profiles from help from other users and from studying wikia such as Naruto, Bleach and Star Wars wikia which are very professional in their character biography creation, and that is the level I try to place my work to (and even here, I took aspects of Young Justice wiki such as the inclusion of Time Stamps). And just a word of thumb, I have been roleplaying for about 6 years now.
Well that's great you've been rping for 6 years and have a goal to go by their standards but when i do my backgrounds mainly 2010 : "Why batman began to investigate Heiko" i am going to actually put a lot of detail into the event itself, this includes the talking. Besides there actually hasn't been that much talking, just a few lines so far that at best make a full paragraph if you add it together. As for the naruto/bleach wiki's in my personal opinion only a select few are good when it comes to bio. The whole history of heiko isn't going to have talking but key points as to 'who he might be' or 'what he might be' is going to have a lot of detail.